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All Deviations


Need to keep these tattered bits
stitched together.

Did you know, one night, while you were sleeping I wandered
to find my sewing needle and thread?
I grasped at the edges of your soul, and strung them
with the deepest parts of mine.
This thread, is flexible and allows free movement. It's temporary,
I promise. I'm not so foolish to think two such as us can handle
One another for very long.
You only mentioned a small prick in the morning when you woke.
And how you pull at me! It's amazing, those little things you do.
Only one can heal the soul, since I doubt you're it. Be gentle
With this thread, these strings. When pulled in malice, in half-hearted jest
The burn. Tattered souls aren't a pretty thing dearheart.
Cannot have my own in shreds. Lovely sights, things that appeal to the eyes.
I can do that. Must move aside those tattered bits, angle the camera
get this shot just right for you, and your fragile views.
Don't look, not just yet, I'm mending the little rips, more thread
Yes, more thread, one to match the soulscapes. Heartscapes. Landscapes.
Hmm, no. These two don't match, but if I tuck a little here, and cut
This tattered edge over there...it just might. Almost done dearest.
Promise it's worth the wait. Sanctuary isn't so far from here. My heart
Beats with Sanctuary. Not always stuck in darkness. You see my sweet?
Thank you for ending the tugs. You're fond of Sanctuary, we all are.
Peaceful and calming, take the weariest bits of the heart, the soul
wash them. I do not share Sanctuary, not because I do not care
It is so hard to get there. All those darkened, tattered bits, they need
Somewhere to belong as well. Shadows in the garden I must tend to.
You're tugging again. I'll stop. I'm not the placid angel you see me to be
Stay with me in Sanctuary for a little bit, I'll cut the thread soon, so
We can part our ways and follow our hearts path. Travel lightly.
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:shrug: Apparently Anne Bishop's Sebastian is still stuck in my head.
These are the better parts of my thoughts. :bucktooth:

Song that was on repeat in my mind:
World Away - Emery

You want to see me disappear?
Well it starts here
I'm trying my best not to say what you don't want to hear
But it's all right, you can cover your, cover your ears

I face my fears just once a year
It's the feeling I get when I want to return
To everything that's in my life
I'll be busting at the seams

It's a gamble either way you play your cards
It's another tidal wave
I'll be waiting with my eyes closed

No, I don't want to be the one who lives a lie but never knew it was just a world away from where I could feel like I've never felt before
So lock the door

You want to see me disappear?
Well it starts here
I'm trying my best just to say what you don't wanna hear
But it's all right, you can cover your, cover your ears

It's a gamble either way you play your cards
It's another tidal wave
I'll be waiting with my eyes closed

No, I don't want to be the one who lives a lie
But never knew it was just a world away
From where I could feel like I've never felt before
So lock the door

You're the one who told me to pack up all my things and leave in the morning.
It's just a world away from here
And I will never bother you no more
And that's for sure

(You'll never)
Take me alive

No, I don't want to be the one who lives a lie
But never knew it was just a world away
From where I could feel like I've never felt before
So lock the door

You're the one who told me to pack up all my things and leave in the morning.
It's just a world away from here
And I will never bother you no more
And that's for sure

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Much love. :heart:
Adri
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~Celenai:iconCelenai: Mar 29, 2008, 1:48:38 PM
I like this. I reckon it could be cut down a lot though, to stylise it and give it a really crisp edge. Right now you do ramble on a bit, and sometimes there's just a touch too much cliche/sentimentality. Still, it's a very nice bit of writing.

The rambling was cute. Mad as ever, I see.

:heart: Zan

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=ashescry:iconashescry: Mar 29, 2008, 4:52:20 PM
I always ramble. :bucktooth: Sadly, this is cut down, I went into entirely too much detail on Notepad. Hahaha, I'll most likely cut it down after I've gotten some sleep. Have yet to sleep, insomnia's picked up again. I got about an hour ..I'm not sure how many hours ago. :lol: Thank you so much for the comment.

How are you? It's been so long. :cuddle:
:heart:

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~Celenai:iconCelenai: Mar 29, 2008, 5:27:39 PM
I'll keep bugging you until you do sort it out. There's so many bits of writing out there that are similarly themed, but they do tend to be... gushy. Your at least is somewhat cynical.

I'm alright, been sucked into a routine of work/online gaming. Ask EndoPsycho, sounds like she may be becoming the same! You got msn, girl? We need some better way of keeping in touch than dA.

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=ahollowvoice:iconahollowvoice: Mar 30, 2008, 1:27:52 AM
It's beautiful Adri, it makes me sad in a way, you area brilliant writer, don't soon give up on the pen and page.

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=ashescry:iconashescry: Mar 30, 2008, 6:41:54 PM
You've no idea how much that means coming from you. :cuddle: nurm
Thank you for everything


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=ashescry:iconashescry: Apr 2, 2008, 12:16:06 AM
ashescry@yahoo.com <MSN. :bucktooth:

I'd get into online gaming if it weren't for my shitty net. D:

Late reply, I know. I'm great.

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