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Consider decadence, consider decay
In all of it’s glory.
Consider persistence, consider the everlasting

Be confident in the existence of these concepts.
Believe them to be one and the same

For decadence is decay,
And persistence, everlasting.

Decadence
The loss of walls around the heart,
sheet rock cracking, paint peeling,
It's chipped. Hands move along picking
revealing such an oddity
this small thing

pump pump
lub dub lub dub
It sings bidi bidi bom bom
aglow with love
shimmer, sparkle
pump pump

Persistence
The beat of the heart,
Steadfast; pumping, always pumping
Fingers approach hesitantly
still aglow
shimmer, sparkle

Forever pumping
the shimmer, beads of sweat
persist, continue on
everlast, must not decay

pump pump
lub dub lub dub
it sings 'bidi bidi bom bom'
with every pump
"Move it along, pass it along"
share the love
this decadence this decay
closing in
pump pump
"Move it along, pass it on"
Persistence

"Must be strong, move it along"
the sheet rock crumbles around the heart
the foundation fails, the high beams come down
Decay
O she sways, she falters
Decadence.

Silence.

Those hesitant fingers hover,
they clamber to lift the rubble
sweetheart still aglow
faint song around her 'bidi bidi bom bom'
fragile, bruised not broken, pump pump
"Move it along, pass it along"
Palpitation, frantic

Everlasting
Hands yet again, raise the heart from the rubble
above the decay, she weeps
pump
pump
so slowly now

The fingers hold her, pumping while she rests
brush of lips against the shimmer
sparkle of a teardrop to mix with her beads
persistence

This is love.
©2008-2009 =ashescry
:iconashescry:

Author's Comments

Insomnia for the win!:#1:
This was on my mind, beating and badgering me, finally wrote it out and now I'm off to bed to try and sleep some.
Thanks to those who read while I was half dead and writing.
=evilsyndicatemember and ~CrimsonCravenheart


Much love.
I also give ~sharethelovecampaign permission to use this.

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Adri!

It's fantabulous! D:

It's so,,, flowy and pretty! FLOWY AND PRETTY! D:

:heart:

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What the hell do you need a watch for, anyway? It was an antique. Deadweight tugging at your wrist. Symbol of the old you. The you that believed in time.

λΩλ
:iconashescry:
D:
I thought you didn't read poetry! D:

Love you muchly, Maria. :smooch:
:heart:

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Y es todo lo que me queda tu amor
Solo fotos y recuerdos.
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Beautifully written, Adri. A lot of emotion, and actions here.
:paranoid: So, that is what love feels like. Hmm. :giggle:
:iconashescry:
Shhu- you know what I mean, Leeanna. :P
Thank you.


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Y es todo lo que me queda tu amor
Solo fotos y recuerdos.
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Beautiful :heart: nurm.

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"I'm in love with the world through the eyes of a girl..." -Elliott Smith
"Taking me for granted was the best and worst mistake you ever made." -The Movielife
"The music begins. Violins." -The New Amsterdams
:iconashescry:
Hush. nurmnurm. :heart:

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Y es todo lo que me queda tu amor
Solo fotos y recuerdos.
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Onomatapoaeia is amaaaaaaaaazing. I love this piece; it feels frantic and calm at the same time.

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If all else perished, and he remained, I should still continue to be; and if all else remained, and he were annihilated, the universe would turn to a mighty stranger: I should not seem a part of it. - Wuthering Heights, Emily Brontë
:iconashescry:
:heart: Thank you again.

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Y es todo lo que me queda tu amor
Solo fotos y recuerdos.
:iconspiker17:
Never you mention it. <3

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If all else perished, and he remained, I should still continue to be; and if all else remained, and he were annihilated, the universe would turn to a mighty stranger: I should not seem a part of it. - Wuthering Heights, Emily Brontë

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